剑桥雅思写作手到擒来的高分需要合理的练习

    1、有足够的练习。这个练习指的是完整地写够量的作文，不管是大作文还是小作文。雅思的作文题目（TASK 1和TASK 2）可以总结成很多种类，在剑桥雅思课堂上老师都会为我们总结出来，因为不知道会考哪一类题目，所以每一类热门题都要做足够练习。

    2、要找老师改。备考期间的写作练习不可少，而且写作练习一定要找老师批改。自己单独练习的最大弊病就是，常犯的错误自己不管怎么改，一定是找不全的，因为已经形成习惯了。而别人就能够看得出来你下意识犯下的错误，即使对方只是一个能力跟你在一个水平的同学，找他们修改对提高作文成绩都是有好处的。剑桥雅思学习顾问组每天都会接到学员的雅思写作题，每一篇文章都会悉心的批改并在学员的休息时间讲解给他们，方便学习吸收。

建议一： 避免重复

1. 尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子:

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

更简洁的表达方式为：

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换，例如：

My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.

这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.

建议二： 避免空洞的单词和词组

1. 一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：

When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换，例如：

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

    总结：不要误解剑桥雅思写作越长越好，上面那些为了长度而增加的内容并不是必需的，化繁为简则可以起得意想不到的效果。大家也可以到中心的展示墙上看看别人的写作，吸取别人的经验。