名师点评09年9月26日雅思考试写作真题(2)

　　第三段：探讨该举措的坏处，4句话。

　　第1句：Accordingly,there also exists some drawbacks which we may not neglect.

　　第2-3句：To start with, 毕业生们由于缺乏涉世经验而容易受浮华世界的诱惑继而无心求学。（2句：High school graduates may be tempted by material richness of the mundane world that they will be distracted from their normal study.3句：Furthermore, they may become so pragmatic and practical that myriads of campus enjoyments and freshness will be deprived from them.）

　　第4句：毕业生由于在学校压抑过久以及心智不成熟，马上步入社会有可能会上当受骗或者由于自律能力不强而误入歧途（In addition, teenagers may be depressed for so long a time that hasty entry into the society will result in their unbridled behaviour and some of the extremists may go so far as to commit crimes and betray the law.）

　　第四段：总结全文，2句话。

　　第1句：综合以上观点，指出高中毕业生花一年时间旅游或积累经验既有好处又有坏处。（To conclude, walking into the society either in the forms of traveling or working bears boons and banes.）

　　第2句：正确的做法是在好处与坏处之间取得一个平衡。（what we need to do is to strike a delicate balance between its advantages and disadvantages.）